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marta
Marta Weeks
United States, California, Elk Grove

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Waiting

Waiting is an activity that fills the senses with anticipation.
It can be exhilarating while at the same time frustrating.
Patience is to savor the suspense of it all.

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cutuparist18 Comment by: cutuparist18 - 2007-08-02 06:37
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my impressions are captured in the phrase "our experiences are dictated by our expectations."
carriedale Comment by: carriedale - 2007-07-11 13:21
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so short yet so right! You pinpointed the feelings of anticipation so nicely. The style of the writing fit the emotion rather well. Good job.
NadiasTheme Comment by: NadiasTheme - 2007-06-28 09:24
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on target! Nothing like the pay off of having patience when you experience what you were waiting for or longing for
Tayo Comment by: Tayo - 2007-06-04 09:53
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Agreed.
manoj Comment by: manoj - 2007-04-12 10:04
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nice thought ... and right you are.
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