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| Ah yes. The meek. The weak willed souls like sheep. Easily swayed by what they see and easily frightened by what they do not. Happy to be fed whatever commercialism, government or the media feeds them or tells them they should live off of. And sadly, yes, they are breeding like sheep as well. Top notch poetry Stevie. Thank you for sharing it wish us. :-) |
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Comment by: - 2007-03-01 11:50
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"People moving like grounded balloons
lives bloated on emptiness"
I know you already got a comment on this, but what a perfect metaphor. I like the bleak tone. The war is over, but it still feels like an appeal to those who are not dead yet, but sleeping. |
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Comment by: waxseal - 2007-02-27 13:01
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Been reading 1984 lately have we???? :-( (I wanted to make that a smiley face but it's been banned.)
Anywho - a very engaging poem - lots of layers - this line stuck for me a bit - the acceptant face of a tomorrow we did not buy - I think it's acceptant . . . anywho - great stuff as always. |
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| The machination of humanity sucks. Although I think it may be starting up here in America. |
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| Speaking out the words, good write. Glen aka FAD... |
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