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marta
Marta Weeks
United States, California, Elk Grove

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Dear Friend

Micholosh, dear friend,
we were colleagues for what at times
seemed too long and now,
feels like just a breath.

Shared points of view and yet
remained friends and even
leaned on each other
when times for leaning came.

Until our friendship was reduced
to merely an electronic to and from,
and even then, we had fun and squabbled.

I regret not attending your flower planting party.
Where was I?
And after your Spring in Paris,
I also missed meeting your lovely Lyle.

Blessings of friendship that will not return.

Conception grants us a slice of living cake,
to eat as life eats us up is the real gist.
You were amongst those who never stopped
looking for more frosting.

We shared painting with words,
landscapes for the imagination.
Walking barefoot on the scorchers of life
and dales of daisies.
Never to give up one or the other,
for emotional suburbia.

Dunked ourselves in living like nuts
from the eager tree.
I will remember you that way,
friend of La Mancha.

Thanks for giving me a copy of
In the arms of a stranger.
If I could do it over again,
I would invite you to plant flowers.

I look forward to seeing you
now and then in the ether of shadows
and to talk with you occasionally,
in spirit.

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Min Comment by: Min - 2006-03-04 11:06
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A natural feel to this one. I really liked the last sentence that confirmed the death of a friend.
Cherley Comment by: Cherley - 2006-01-09 10:18
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This is very nice,clean cut and easty to read. It made me think of my friends whom I haven't seen for so very long. The people I used to spend a lot of time with but over the years we've gone our separate ways.
marta Comment by: marta - 2005-12-20 06:42
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Thank you and so do you.
Karina K Comment by: Karina K - 2005-12-15 11:46
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Some of your poems are uploaded as stories. I don't read a lot of poetry. But from what I've read of your work, you express yourself real well.
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