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In My More Cynical Moments
I've acquired a lot of things that I probably don't need,
and I've left behind a lot of things I really should have kept.
I sometimes wonder, in my more cynical moments
- which are many -
years from now,
which category you'll fall into.
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Comment by: - 2007-03-01 11:48
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| I often wonder what others have categorized me at. More often than not I'd probably fall into the first. Maybe it's weird but I think exploring cynical thought actually makes things more romantic because you know what you're up against, but you still take the chance. |
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Comment by: waxseal - 2007-02-27 13:06
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| oooohhhhhhh! really liked this - made me think of the plums in the icebox - well done! |
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| Mmm, delicious. This is so cynical, so bitter, so cool and sarcastic, and so honest. Clear and refreshing, like a glass of water, but with something in it that bites back, hard. Great! |
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| I like the clear style and the sense of persona you give. This one must work well live. |
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I thought that was beautiful.
Incase you were wondering. |
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