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Comment by: Apothy - 2007-09-13 22:13
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| I like it, it flows well, but I don't think your title works. I always think titles are rather impotant. |
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| Great piece, and something anyone who's loved and lost can relate to. Well done! |
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| I enjoyed how you addressed the way we all pretent we no longer care when we do. With ghost of my love could tat also be in part the rejections of your own feeling toward your love lost? |
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| The line "apparitions of love that haunt me,' was used to great effect. I think you really connected with the feeling of loss in an ended relationship, believable emotion in your words. |
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| I enjoyed this poem very much. While reading it I could picture a few of the "ghost" that seem to follow me. |
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