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ESL
Erin Statzer Leadbetter
United States, VA, Richmond

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Swirling Demise


©2007 ~chasingtheday


Swirling Demise

I am not a perfect person.
I revile in my mistakes.
Dark days have haunted me.
My tears could easily form lakes.


Pain, is a part of life.
My nerves often left exposed.
Almost forced to forfeit,
Result; my self-confidence decomposed.


I'm swirling like a paper airplane,
waiting for my demise.
I don't want my old life.
I just want bluer skies.


Guilt is eating me alive.
It is time for change.
I can't stay in this state.
Priorities; I need to re-arrange.


It's funny how fast it hits you.
One minute on cloud nine.
The next, can't hardly function.
Where's the bottom line?

Written By: ESL
©2007



Started this a couple of months ago, finished today.  Listening to:

 The White Stripes-You've Got Her In Your Pocket

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thisISme Comment by: thisISme - 2007-03-31 19:01
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I love everything about this poem. It's just too perfect for words!
2runaway Comment by: 2runaway - 2007-03-12 17:54
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Nice poem, it felt very open and honest. I also liked the way you ended with a question, letting the reader answer. Thanks for the read!
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