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TonyfromBenoni
Tony Lopes
South Africa, Gauteng, Jhb

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Interview

Do you enjoy working with others?
Sneers the earthworm
Edging to the surface

Where do you see yourself in five years?
Leers the maggot
Nibbling on the raw nerve

Are you a people person?
The cockroach cackles
Floating in curdled milk

When can you start?
A faint whimper as you grind
Your heel with squishy confidence

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sudipal Comment by: sudipal - 2007-03-02 12:38
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lol. on the other hand, it's also kind of a downer. good read, though.
Daquiridame Comment by: Daquiridame - 2007-03-02 11:46
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I love it, it evokes images of the underground mafia ;)
wolfgrl1423 Comment by: wolfgrl1423 - 2007-03-02 06:07
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I really liked this, and as I begin to interview for part-time jobs I will be thinking of this poem. Great Job!
hulshizer Comment by: hulshizer - 2007-02-28 03:10
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I liked this very much as I can remember a number of those insects in my life.
Secrets Comment by: Secrets - 2007-02-27 16:32
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Great analogies and a clever write.
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