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Acreative1
Anetra Clark
United States, MI, Kalamazoo

My Bookshop
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Gasoline Kiss

Well come on baby
Wont you tell me
Wont you sell me another line
I hear the words your speaking
I know the thoughts your thinking
Make me bleed for your pleasure
Another time

Cross the threshold
Of no emotion
I paid the price for my soul
Friends with benefits
Loss of innocence
In those eyes of ice
I lost control

Well come on baby
Won't you bleed me
Won't you feed me more of your lies
I am the anti valentine
Poisoned arrows, twisted mind
Your ravaged savior crucified
Used, refused and then tossed aside

Cross the threshold
Of no devotion
I paid the price for my soul
Friends with benefits
Loss of innocence
In those eyes of ice
I never know

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angelbytheocean Comment by: angelbytheocean - 2007-03-01 07:21
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"I paid the price for my soul"
the stakes are high in some relationships and the price we pay to be apart of them is sometimes unjust.

"loss of innocence
in those eyes of ice
I never know"
I loved these words! Although short, these words are strong!
I enjoyed reading~!!
Ethgar Comment by: Ethgar - 2007-02-28 18:51
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This breaths of pure contempt and in a hopeless way...
"In those eyes of ice
I never know"

Pretty self loathing.. I enjoyed reading it nonetheless.
Nice work!!
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