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Jan Gilmer
United States, OH, Euclid

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Thoughts of You

                                                I think of you so often, and it

Always makes me smile,


            The thoughts of us together


Makes my daydreams all worthwhile.


 


            I only wish that you were here '


So I could hold you tight,


            And we could spend some time together,


Just the two of us for the night.


 


            When my days are slowly dragging by '


I think of you and then,


            The sun shines a little brighter and


I'm happy all over again.


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Valerie Comment by: Valerie - 2007-03-20 04:32
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I like the form. It's a different way to write rhymed poetry. Interesting.
It is a very neat liitle poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment by: - 2007-03-04 16:51
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Cute ,sweet, loving poem.I can relate.
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