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deepinside
Sammie menna
United States, Florida, Punta Gorda

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Forgotten.

I've forgotten you and me
I've forgotten what we had
I've forgotten all the smiles
And the times you made me sad
I forgot when you, said you loved me
And when i gazed into your eyes
I've forgotten that i loved you
But i remember all the lies
I remembered when you told me
You were'nt exactly sure
Remebering when you said
It hurt cause you love her
I've forgotten all the times
I caught you looking at me
But i remember when my friends had said
You were talking bad about me
Now i remember when i said
I was completly over you
And exactly how i knew
WE were completly over too
Tho as that we are friends
My heart its been moved on
And my lesson has been learned
That what was once, is gone.

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michi0 Comment by: michi0 - 2008-02-09 19:46
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I like how this poem is relatable. And its interesting because the person in the poem threw all the happy memories out, only to have memories of the hurt. Kepp the good work up.
DEL Comment by: DEL - 2007-03-20 14:26
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I like it. I'm not sure what exactly about your poem struck my interest, but I did like it. Great rhyme scheme, too.
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