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Dream Catcher

Granulated sand, grazing the side of my body
As I lay,
Like I have so many times before
When I seek for the seashells to become my dream catcher
And take me away
From all of the truth that has been deceivably portrayed
Amongst the sun and the purity of water
Along the horizon, there they lie, as I do
Waiting patiently, beautifully embarked
Into dream catchers, I so desperately need
As I lay,
Hungrily searching for more of what I have been deprived
Into this life that is so emphatically depraved.

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ViolettePen Comment by: ViolettePen - 2007-07-19 17:56
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I envy your ability to write good short poems. And that's a compliment! Good job with this one!
Comment by: - 2006-05-16 14:46
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Lovely images.
Comment by: - 2006-03-26 17:19
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Enjoyed this very much! You have a wonderful way with words. Never stop dreaming though. Your dreams will come true when you least expect them to.
Comment by: - 2006-03-04 14:43
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By the beach you like to dream, and the seashells take you there, that's how I take this one. Nice
Comment by: - 2006-02-19 23:52
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This has an aur all its own.

Well writen and well read.
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