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Comment by: JED3 - 2008-10-02 08:03
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Nice work. Clear poetic imagery. I liked your painting of the spring sun. Most people don't notice the different color of it in the spring. You do. It's more white and flat due to the lesser angle of Earth’s axis to the sun’s rays.
John |
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this is so much nicer than an alarm clock
very, very nice work |
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| Beautiful. Your poetry seems very uplifting, a friendly change from what I'm used to. I love it. :] |
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| Oh!!!, again I just wish it were longer. I get so caught up in your poetry that it leaves me feeling empty when it ends. It feels like I am not allowed to reach the poetic climax before coming down. With all that being said it screams talent and again keep up the great work. |
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| a nice descriptive write capturing exactly what you have written...Luv Lance:) |
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