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Comment by: JED3 - 2008-10-02 07:57
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Ronikka:
This is a perfect description of idealistic love. A love we strive for, well knowing it doesn't exist in our dimension.
Best of luck,
John |
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'For love is an emotion found deep within your heart
Not a dictionary definition'
Well i don't know what is the meaning of love nor did i bother to look into a dictionary...but whatever it is...after reading you poem i know its got to be beautiful.
nice work!:) |
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| I quite like the ending. It's a snap back to reality from the fantastic imagery that had my mind flying through the clouds. It's very powerful, but short and terse, which is my favorite kind of poetry. Wonderful job. |
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Comment by: PANDORA - 2007-03-08 18:41
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sounds like a crystal bell--This is really a great use of description. It is so funny to read this and your use of "Garden of Eden", when I just used it as a reference in my last comment.
You are so correct: Love is not a dictionary, it is a feeling.
I look forward to reading more of your work.** |
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| I loved this poem and its balance. Great work, I did wish it were longer, however. |
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