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clenching your body softly
warms my apathetic heart
i can barely recall your name
we've just met this evening
i don't know you
and although i may not love you for all time
in this moment your in my arms
i'll keep you safe
in my embrace
as i wonder how long it will be
before i again see your smiling face
-ash
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Maybe the last line could read. "Before again, I see your smiling face." "your" should be "you're". Good work. I really like it when poems set a scene.
