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Rage Sky Rage
Rage sky rage
with hot pink plastic poison,
stinging the horizon
electric with dragons breath
and oceans heaving breakneck blue.
There is magic spilt
across the lofty atmospheres highway,
cloud slivers racing against
rosy red paint,
seeping from the heavens
and slicing through
with henna haunting inspiration.
A cloudscape spectacle,
daring candlelit diamond perfection
to compete
with this generously graced
love lit vision.
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| Damn... I love the words used... I like when people use words that aren'y used alot..to make the writer think more....good poem..good vision.... |
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Comment by: jusk - 2007-03-07 17:20
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| I love the line "love lit vision" for some reason. Nice little piece, very visual. Good stuff, but not a fan of the CAPS though! |
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Comment by: solaris - 2007-03-07 05:48
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| hot damn! the visuals in this make for a dramatic impact, but it tails off just a little at the end for me - mind you, how can a candle compete with a sky like that? i also love the way you blow a raspberry at conventional layout, lol |
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