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very powerful and poignant read. Unfortunately and tragically all too common a scene. sigh... your ending wraps it up perfectly. Thanks for the read.
I just wanted to say also that I appreciate you writing about this, it's a difficult, difficult thing.
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Comment by: Anne - 2007-03-20 01:08
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I like this. Nice form and format to this piece.Good flow to. I think everyone has said what needs to be said about this peice . So all I will Add is FANTASTIC.
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| I love this piece. The way that you've paced it is very clear as it really cares the reader through the event. |
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| I think we get inspiration from what the real world offers, raw and most of the time, unfortuante. I like the way you wrote this and I admire you for considering the suggestions. Writers like us need fellow writers to hone our skill. Your work exemplifies a vast array of how you can tap thoughts to words to the readers' minds. Great read. By the way, "cinder Shoes" was written for the lady I met in a fastfood parking lot. This was when I was still in Philippines. I am angry too that many women fall to this trade bec of our corrupt government... to much angst so I think this week, I will try to write about "inspiring" things:) |
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| I am moved to hold a moments' silence in my soul for events portrayed here. So much said with such simplicity and empathy. And courage to write on this theme and from that particular perspective. I truly like everything I have read by you, Ethgar, and hope that whatever feeds your poets heart continues to do so with clarity and grace. |
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