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Jamilah
Linda Jitmoud
United States, Kentucky, Lexington

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A Special Friend

So much I don't know--
your voice
your smiles
the way you laugh

But I know your heart--
caring
sincere
the way you are.

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MaryannWebb Comment by: MaryannWebb - 2007-06-07 04:59
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Great piece for a modern world, where convention has become unconventional, and we meet friends how we would not have expected 20 years ago.
Very sweet piece, with each word sitting in its own space. This piece made me smile, that people are still willing to appreciate the soul and how much it has to offer.
Teri Comment by: Teri - 2007-04-24 21:18
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Oh. Well, stumbling upon this the way I just did ... I have a HUGE lump in my throat.

I'll respond more in email, but I wanted to say thank you, yet that doesn't sound quite right. It sounds too trite and not quite enough. One thing:

>>this poem was sweet but boring<<

I can't stop laughing. Seriously.

Thank you, Linda, from the bottom of my heart. I feel awful for not responding sooner.

Teri xo
RZelbecq Comment by: RZelbecq - 2007-04-14 13:34
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Honestly, this poem was sweet but boring, unlike a lot of your other work.
Jane Bowyer Comment by: Jane Bowyer - 2007-03-20 03:44
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A beautiful little poem. It made me smile.
Light Comment by: Light - 2007-03-15 06:29
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nice poem. short but it says alot
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