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Lance W Toohey
Lance Toohey
Australia, Queensland, Cairns

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THE ROCKER

To all who live with the pain if Alzhmeiners.


In the dim lit corner of her lonely world
Devoid of warmth and of cheer,
She sits 'pon her rocker, her companion with age
An emptyness fills her with fear.

The clock on the mantel doth chime no more
The laughter of children has passed,
Alone in her rocker she waits for the dawn
Time, it has shrouded her past.

Tightly she clutches her pink tattered gown
'Tis old but it serves, for 'tis warm,
Alone in her rocker she yearns for the light
Existance doth leave her forlorn.

The walls of her world do whisper of times
When laughter and love did resound,
Alone in her rocker she smiles at the shadows
For she senses they once were abound.

A teardrop falls 'pon a photograph
That her fragile hand gently hold,
Alone in her rocker she smiles at the shadows
She prays that her past will unfold.

But all that she sees are sweet children
And the gentleman's eyes are so blue,
Alone in her rocker she weeps at their sight
For their memory her mind doth persue.

So lonely the darkness, so lonely the pain
No past gives you no tomorrow,
Alone in her rocker she faces the day
But the night brings the same sad sorrow.

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carriedale Comment by: carriedale - 2007-07-21 04:06
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I DID cry. So sad but so true...you did such a wonderful job at capturing the feelings of this poor woman and many other people who do/will go through this VERY tragic experience. I watched my Grandfather go through this. Thanks for sharing.
Grounded Vertigo Comment by: Grounded Vertigo - 2007-03-21 09:23
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This is a very touching piece. I found the last stanza the perfect ending. You have really been able to get across the pain the woman was living with.
christskorb11 Comment by: christskorb11 - 2007-03-20 11:54
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THe Last Stanza was in perfect place and really put a conclusion to the piece. This is certainly wrought with your style and tone but the theme was a little unexpected.
hatchzel Comment by: hatchzel - 2007-03-14 20:13
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Made my heart sink after days of writing a poem for my grandmother. I think I should email this (if you will aloow me) and my poem to my mother so she can realize what she needs to do. Its a wake up call for evryone, Everybody grows old, memories can fade which is the most painful thing to occur. I would rather have wrinkles all over than lose my thoughts. Tragic but nice read. Its's on my shelf definitely.
2runaway Comment by: 2runaway - 2007-03-11 17:20
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Very touching Lance,
"Alone in her rocker she waits for the dawn
Time, it has shrouded her past."
I liked these two lines and the last two lines, they really stuck.
beautiful poem, sad.
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