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Hollykinz
Holly Taylor
United Kingdom, Rushden, Northants

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Letting love live

And I will sit here,
Waiting for you to whisper my name again,
Telling me to fall,
Into the unknown,
The suffocating smell,
Of broken rose petals,
And the hot sticky air,
Reminding me of you
Having no personality without you,
Can't concentrate when you are near,
Seems like there is no cure for this madness,
Just wanting to talk to you again,
To get to that high again,
Knowing that it means nothing to you.


The smile vanishes from my face,
The glint in my eyes is gone,
And suddenly the world seems to turn dark,
Light from the sun just leaks away,
The tears from behind my eyes,
Suddenly decide to break through,
Showing the colours of my emotions,
And I finally know,
The want for your capture is just too strong,
The willingness to let go too little,
And I just want to go home,
To the rain and thunder,
In the corner of your heart where I belong,
Filled with light and bones.

Amongst the blood and the sweat,
In the darkest cavern,
The widest valley
Of you heart
Lies my wings ripped and torn,
From when you snatched them off my back,
And tossed them on the ground,
You walked over them a thousand times,
Your head away in dreams,
Of anything but me,
Not knowing you were pushing me,
Not knowing that you were crushing me,
So hard I couldn't breathe,

Heart pounding in the dark,
Thinking of the insanity of being alone,
When I know that your heart calls for mine,
As mine calls for you,
Why fight the feeling,
Stop fighting,
Let
This
Love
Live

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thisISme Comment by: thisISme - 2007-03-13 17:24
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The emotions are so strong and having some of the words sharp but yet some so elogent it mixes very well.
Joni Ramos Comment by: Joni Ramos - 2007-03-11 15:05
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And I just want to go home,
To the rain and thunder,
In the corner of your heart where I belong,
Filled with light and bones.

Amongst the blood and the sweat,
In the darkest cavern,
The widest valley
Of you heart
Lies my wings ripped and torn

These lines evoked strong emotions as did your entire piece. Thanks for sharing
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