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Nice last line. Stuck out the most to me.
Thanks for sharing,
john |
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| you've captured a tender moment nicely in this. Has a wistful quality that makes me want to conjure the moment back. |
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Short but Sweet. I like your choice of wording in this one :-)
Stand out line for me was 'Like the night stars in the morning sky'.
Great work :-) |
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| I really enjoyed the imagery of this poem but I was less feeling a little lost. My heart searches for what is under the surface trying to connect with something more real then the metaphor. It leaves me wanting to know the speaker and his/her 'angel'. Iā??m tempted by the insubstantial beauty. |
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Aw. Sweet. I quite like it since I've done one about the sea myself. It's funny though. I hate the sea because I can't swim well and am so small the small waves nearly knock me off my feet, and yet when it comes to imagination and writing about it, I love it.
I guess my ideas are like water itself. Ever changing, flowing, sometimes blocked, sometimes dark and cloudy, and other times it's as clear as raindrops are against the backing of the sun. |
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