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| This is a very interesting perspective on a prison experience. But I also sense the resoluteness at the end, and the battling back from all of the bad things, too. I agree that I don't have much experience with the judicial system, though, luckily. |
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Comment by: SacredV - 2007-08-23 17:21
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| Slam dunk on this piece.....the 2nd half, I really like. The emotions throughout the poem are flowing right out....I like the intensity in your words. I agree with Katydidn't, that line is killer. Great imagery. Good Stuff. |
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| I love 'damn do we live by second thoughts...' That is superb! This is gritty and gives insight into the mind, guilt, and unseen life of addicts. Way to put it out there. |
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| Not a subject I can relate to much at all, but this poem was very well written and flowed nicely. I loved the imagery that you used. Well done! |
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Comment by: PANDORA - 2007-03-13 18:41
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I live by thirdly stating
--This was a great line--
I feel this tone of submission to what cannot be changed, and being so tired one cannot move.
Good line breaks make this piece flow well, and good use of description made this a good read.
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