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I do agree with the others. I liked the rhythm and think its done very lyrically. Good job.
C |
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This is very lyrical. You should maybe consider developing your work in line with song. Good job.
J. Edward Nolan |
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| This is the kind of writing that leaps off the page. It puts me in mind of Lycia. I can almost hear their soft melodies in the background.... |
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Comment by: Light - 2007-03-16 04:47
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| love the rythm too. its a good read. u shud have higer confidence in urself. this poems good. |
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Comment by: Anne - 2007-03-15 18:49
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Nice rhythm . Well written
Thanks for sharing
Anne |
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