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Kimberley
Kimberley Linstruth-Beckom
United States, CT, Middletown

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The Olive Branch

There were a few peaking out
They were mostly yellow
And orange from what I
Could see between the puffs
Of gray and white.
The beams of orange
Went on a search
While the puffs became misty eyed.
They both touched and formed
A rainbow of blue, purple,
Red and yellow.
I grabbed a loose branch of leaves
So the mist wouldn't get me.
The branch was new fallen
With its leaves just turning
Into that deep olive green.
A caterpillar appears
To say hi from the leaves.
It's beginning to stream now,
Instead of mist.
A feeling of peace came over me.
I soaked in all of the beauty.
For that moment, I knew,
I was not alone.
He will always be there.
He is as constant as this rain.
The caterpillar jumps up
On its hinds as if to agree.
The caterpillar knows
We are equals with His lovingness.
And when this day is long
Forgotten by us both,
That branch and that day
Will still be a memory.
It's been years since
I thought of that day.
I just wish I could
Get back the smell of April.
It's been too long since
I splashed in puddles.

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ParchmentPoetry Comment by: ParchmentPoetry - 2008-04-06 11:39
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I love the caterpillar part. Out God takes care of nature--and us. It's been a while since I splased in puddles, too. It's a wonderful thing to do with a child. They laugh so, and their joy is contageous. Next time it rains, find a kid and go splash. It's amazing therapy. J
Susan Comment by: Susan - 2007-07-07 20:37
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I like this one. I like how you start it out mysteriously, and you need to read on to discover what was peaking out. I also like your conclusion with thte feeling of peace and sensing that you were not alone.
Anne Comment by: Anne - 2007-03-21 16:03
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Lovely poem. Good imagery to very well written
Comment by: - 2007-03-14 19:27
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This poem has a lovely, nostalgic quality. Good use of the senses throughout ... I felt like I was there.

My only suggestion is to consider alternatives for the same colors to break it up ... golden instead of yellow, for example.

Very nice poem!
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"The Puzzle Called Life"

by Kimberley Linstruth-Beckom



I learned through the writing of this book that there are many people and things that come your way while you go through your straight edges, corners, and funny-shaped pieces in life. This collection is about life, death, and how to cope.

The Puzzle Called Life

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