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xemoxangelx
Emily Barker
United Kingdom, Essex

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forgive me?

Do you even know why im here?
why i have overcome my fear,
to be sitting here right next to you,
thats why,
but do you care?
i do not know
i have overcome so much sorrow and woe
but still you do not seem to care
you look through me as if im thin air
i know you have been through alot,
but that does not mean i have not,
please look at me,understand my plea
please dont treat me as if im dirt
dont look away when i rip my shirt
ive explained to you again and again
why i did those things,where and when,
i had my reasons
you should know that by now,
please just tell me how
i can make it all ok again
like it was back then
dont let this come between us
please just say you forgive me.

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Machelle815 Comment by: Machelle815 - 2007-05-08 11:04
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I really like this. This is something that a lot of women - myself included can relate to.
EnigmaticSoul Comment by: EnigmaticSoul - 2007-04-22 06:02
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I sense a lot of emotion in this poem. You say exactly how you feel, from heart and soul.
brofoster Comment by: brofoster - 2007-04-20 13:23
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I love the feel of the lines in this poem. Great work
Anne Comment by: Anne - 2007-03-28 01:57
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Great poem . Love these lines ........................

but still you do not seem to care
you look through me as if im thin air
i know you have been through alot,
but that does not mean i have not,


Great work well done

Anne
airyfairie Comment by: airyfairie - 2007-03-20 04:48
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Great piece, I could relate to this and your feelings of frustration and hurt. It is all too often that relationships are destroyed through stubbornness.
"i can make it all ok again
like it was back then
dont let this come between us
please just say you forgive me"
I love the honesty and especially these last lines. Cheers for sharing.
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