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Zeb79
Warren Gill
Ireland, Dublin

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Alcatraz Mind

Asurge within on free winged birds
Hurtling runaway train like words
Bursting helpless rational bubbles
Cement clarity in piling troubles.

Raging turmoil fiercely grips
As conceptual reality slowly slips
Tipping horrid shadows over head
Replacing fluffy light instead.

Unscalable frustrating great walls
Happily entomb deafening calls
Appallingly unheard outside
Where everyday normalities reside.

Insurmountable agony sweeps 'round
A doubled up wretch's silent sound
Bound by insanity and love blind
Imprisoned 'midst an Alcatraz mind.

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vickihowery Comment by: vickihowery - 2007-10-27 05:20
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Love the rhythm and flow of this piece. The imagery here is well done. Excellent ending - bringing it all together so well. I really enjoyed this .
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