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Ethgar
Ethgar Rios
United States, NJ, Kearny

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Memphis Strings

Beale Street in Memphis is famous for it's jazz and blues clubs. Starting around May, the street is open only to pedestrians at night. Various musicians perform outside of the venues while people walk by and listen. They serve beer in large cups that could only be described as small buckets. The energy is contagious and if you play the guitar, this is one of the most inspiring places on God's green earth.

Some of the terms I used in this poem are familiar to those that play the guitar'¦ I hope this doesn't obscure the image too much for some of you.
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Dusk and a
carnival bash
blossoms
bouquets of beer
on crowded corners
barre chords collide
storming
Tennessee blues
as symphony strolls
through Beale Street.

multitudes
materialize
lured listeners
mesmerized
by a jubilee
strumming jazz
harmony with
hammer-ons
pull-offs
and slides
on Les Paul
and Gibson
guilding melodies
under inlays of
vibrating veneer.

this acoustic Mecca
beckons
echoing ecstasy
with every string
of my soul

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InHizImage Comment by: InHizImage - 2007-05-03 09:05
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In the first stanza you misspelled Beale
One thing I, along with most publishes, like to find in poetry is great structure and good use of alliteration. It makes the read more enjoyable and flow smoother. You've done an excellent job with both in this piece.

I have been to Memphis but only briefly. Still, this piece reminded me of New Orleans. Great imagery and word choice.

Yvylyn
CINDYANNE99 Comment by: CINDYANNE99 - 2007-04-29 17:06
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Excellent write here. I found nothing confusing to me, even though im not much of a guitar understander, LOL. Again I love the imagary that is behind your poems and felt this one really take me away to that place. I was there with a beer in hand listen to such great musicians. Stand out for me was -
echoing ecstasy
with every string
of my soul

Just beautiful, amazing choice of words :>
ellykoggle Comment by: ellykoggle - 2007-04-28 18:11
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this put a smile on my face - I really enjoyed your descriptions. Love music, love the blues and I love poems about both. Thanks for the enjoyable read :)
K.
manoj Comment by: manoj - 2007-03-27 21:57
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I liked the poem and particularly the lines..
this acoustic Mecca
beckons
echoing ecstasy
with every string
of my soul

Best wishes.
wolfgrl1423 Comment by: wolfgrl1423 - 2007-03-27 07:59
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I really like this poem, I haven't been to Memphis yet. It reminds me of being on vacation, that whole feeling of live music in the streets. Great job, thanks for sharing it with us.
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