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Anne
Anne Dickson
United Kingdom, Northern Ireland, Cookstown

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My Santa Story ©

The north pole is where Santa lives,
He and Mrs Claus.
The elves are busy working,
Making toys for a good cause.

The children send him letters
Saying what they like,
Dolls and prams and magic sets
Even a motorbike.

He tries to give them what they want,
if he possibly can.
Santa's saying "Ho! Ho! Ho!"
He is a jolly man.

He dons his suit and his black boots,
and he is looking swell.
He fills his sacks with lots of toys,
and loads his sleigh as well.

The reindeer are all waiting
to pull on Santa's sleigh,
As Christmas eve gets closer
and Santa's on his way.

He enters all the houses
while we are fast asleep,
leaving presents by the tree
he really is so sweet.

He travels all around the world,
on that special night.
For all the little children
he does everything just right.

They get up in the morning
to see what Santa brought.
All their wishes all came true
and Santa had not forgot.

The children are all happy,
playing with their toys.
Showing all their presents.
To other girls and boys.

So have a merry Christmas
and have a lot of fun.
I hope my little story
brings joy to everyone.

*wrote this last xmas but put it up for the peeps who have not read it*

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Kimberley Comment by: Kimberley - 2007-03-21 13:37
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Very sweet poem. I like your style of nostalgia.
RoadPoet Comment by: RoadPoet - 2007-03-20 16:23
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Again flawless rhyme and sounding beat. Rather cute and a lighthearted read. Yeah smiles all around in this one.
Kav Comment by: Kav - 2007-03-20 02:04
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A sweet poem which has a magical innocence to it. This will go down a treat with all those little ones at Christmas
barbaella Comment by: barbaella - 2007-03-19 23:28
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I love it, Anne, it would be great to read to the wee little ones at Christmas. Hey you are Scottish, well I believe I`m a part of Scottish desent my mothers madden name was McAdam could it be I`m not sure barbaella.
Comment by: - 2007-03-19 22:34
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Another wonderful read for the little ones, Anne! It's a wonderful gift for the holidays :-)

Michael
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