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Raynwomaan
Rayna McGaughy
United States, TN, Atoka

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Polishing

Words,
like rocks in a drum,
tumble around, over each other,
through grit,
polishing,
refining,
evolving.

There are people who
rush their words,
take them out too soon,
while they're still rough,
unfinished thoughts.
Jagged edges and blurred,
vague lines
tied together
with awkward knots,
make little sense.
They grasp too hard,
and the ideas
crumble under the weight
of their haste.

Still others hold their words in
too long,
letting the thoughts roll around,
tumble together
until the grit
and the ideas are
indescernible.

There are wordsmiths,
jewelers,
who know
when to take them out,
how to string them together,
how to finish them
into works
that shine brightly,
leaving an impression
on others.

Words,
tumbling together,
like rocks in a drum.

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Comment by: - 2007-09-01 09:43
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I have to say, this was very good. Your freeverse is thoughtful, eloquent, and full of flow. I enjoyed it as an extended metaphor for what writing poetry (or anything worth reading really) is like. The second to last and the last stanza itself were particularly good, ending the poem on a potent note. Nice job.
hornedtoad Comment by: hornedtoad - 2007-04-26 10:08
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I really enjoyed this... I enjoyed the parallels and the dicotomy.
chilliray Comment by: chilliray - 2007-03-17 11:32
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hey, really nice idea for a poem, and well executed. it might be fun to reveal what kind of wordsmith you are; or a combination of the three? i was impressed by this.
Comment by: - 2007-02-13 22:29
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"They grasp too hard"

do they ever!


...i love this, very much, everyone should read this!! ;)

PeaceLoveUnity&Respect
logicustracticus Comment by: logicustracticus - 2006-12-15 15:29
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Yup and your a wordsmith, sculpted these extremely well
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