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Vegas Or Valhalla
You were concerned about the weight I'd lost.
You were worried by my pallor.
But I'm doing fine,
I've joined the line
for Vegas or Valhalla.
From start to end, from birth to death,
from alphas to omegas:
it's set in stone,
our story's known
from Valhalla to Vegas.
I've known you low in opulence
and I've seen you high on squalor.
This losing streak
will reach its peak
in Vegas or Valhalla.
I've turned my back on fear and faith
and all those things that plague us.
I'm running late,
but I'll meet my fate,
be it Valhalla or Vegas.
I've had my fill of cowardice
and I'm tired-out with valour.
My godless prayer:
I'll see you there,
in Vegas or Valhalla.
For good or ill,
I'll love you still
in Vegas or Valhalla.
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just the title makes this the best thing i've read on here. i don't drop by here too much these days but when i do and i find a gem like this it makes the effort of typing in my password worthwhile.
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Comment by: Gregory - 2007-11-13 15:29
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Seems to give an impresion of meaning without expresing it directly.Sort of like bob dylan in that respect.
Whatever fate throws up you can deal with it.
Maybe one day I'll be able to write as well as this. |
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Holy crap, that's good. I feel that this is going to be a bit of a superfulous comment, but it's so incredible, I must still say something. Clever, well-written, funny in a bitter way, and remarkably poignant for all its wittiness.
Poems like this are worth a million stanzas from almost anyone else. Fantastic. |
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In reality, Las Vegas is over-rated. I'd rather walk the halls of mythical Valhalla....or...mythical Vegas for that matter.
Another triumphant piece, darling !!!
D.Dread |
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| I'm with "Grounded" could almost hear the music in the background and felt the whole thing flowed really well. Nice work! |
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