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Lance W Toohey
Lance Toohey
Australia, Queensland, Cairns

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FOREVER I'LL BE TRUE

just playing the songwriter....smile

I watched
As you walked from the doorway
I watched
As you walked from my life,
I watched as the winds blew a chill through the night
And cut through my soul like a knife.
I watched
At my dreams being shattered
I watched
As the night stole my heart,
I watched as all memories were scattered like leaves
For I never thought we'd ever part.

Come back to these arms that once held you
Come back to these arms, once true,
Come back to this heart that held you within
Come back to this man you once knew.

I looked
At the fool in the mirror
I saw
The mistakes I had made,
I pray you'll remember the good times
Let all the harsh words gently fade.
I watched
As your shadow departed
I watched
As the rain drowned my tears,
I watched as my heartache cried out in vain
And the wind it now echoed my fears.

Come back to these arms that once held you
Come back to these arms, once true,
Come back to this heart that held you within
Come back to this man you once knew.
Forever we'll walk in the moonlight
Forever I'll love only you,
Forever I'll kiss; the tears from your cheeks
Forever my love, I'll be true.

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christskorb11 Comment by: christskorb11 - 2007-04-16 14:19
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LAnce, I really Love this song, very well written, of course I can pick up on the melody somewhat but id love to hear it with music!
Anne Comment by: Anne - 2007-03-28 01:48
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Lovely poem about love that is lost. The heartache , the longing for her to return. Great emotions here .

Well done

Anne
msstroda Comment by: msstroda - 2007-03-26 08:51
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Well done. Love lost can be a truly inspiring emotional thing to write about. I like it.
thecandystore Comment by: thecandystore - 2007-03-25 11:08
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Beautifully written and well-rhymed. Good work. I truly enjoyed it

C
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