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PhatBob
Bob Rainey
United Kingdom

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Locks of Love

We're all pirouetting awkwardly
toward some hope
and joy
So shall we all take comfort
in the fact we
share this toil?

Our lights will die for having shone
and we decide
how truly
New dawns await for everyone
and sometimes you
can choose them

And should dawn find an empty street;
rain-slicked it
is still better
than endless nights for countless
souls held fast there
by the thresher

These cold machines who won't accept
the impacts of
their doings
would want to hear the plaintive cries
of weak wills
they are chewing
To prove that they are predators
in their world of
killed or killer
Men shouldn't kill the things they love
that's fatuous
and silly

Lets leave these cold dead things behind
and stagger on
towards
a unity which means something
with songs instead
of swords

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bonnieclarke Comment by: bonnieclarke - 2006-05-10 20:55
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love...it's in us to give. great poem...love your little BIO too. rock on!
Pantheress Comment by: Pantheress - 2006-03-02 22:43
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Men shouldn't kill the things they love

i like your expression, thank you for sharing
pantheress
Joni Ramos Comment by: Joni Ramos - 2006-02-20 21:16
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I like the 1st and last stanza. That about sums it up for me. Thanks.
Charmain Comment by: Charmain - 2005-12-30 15:23
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awwww lovely .... what do the Newyorkers think of your work?

I hope you also bring some of these guys back with ya too :) hehe ... how are ya >??

you already know I totally love this poem :)
Cherley Comment by: Cherley - 2005-12-30 13:54
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Idealistic and nice. We all should love more and put more nice thoughts in our lives. Forget about hate and swords.
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