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christskorb11
Kent Ashby Korb
United States, NC, Sapphire

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I dont know what this is!

Here it is, a present just for you.
A present truth, my presence here to comfort
I present you with my love and to the world
I do present you with your beauties ever glowing

There you are! I thought I wouldnt find you. I wasnt looking very well, though longing ever still. My eyes see dimly, thoughts are foggy often ruled by vain emotions, lust and all is fragrant potions. but there you are, a very present cure a light that shines, a balm for eyes that foggy pictures see, a prestine flowered spring like fragrance to cleanse my senses towards a truth. Dang I cant believe, its you, Im speechless, breathless, I cant wait to have you. But ill wait to prove that I beleive your more than well then worthe my all and all.

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Comment by: - 2007-03-26 11:47
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This is my favorite kind of piece! I love how it flows, mere thoughts on paper, written in the spur of the moment. I can't say enough! I LOVE it!!!
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