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milner place
Milner Place
United Kingdom, West Yorkshire, Huddersfield

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The Memory Man

(For Cristina B-G)

Time is change, change is time
and from the vibrations of his life,
like tree rings, he could then compute
the harsh and arid seasons, flushes
of passion, harvests of lotus leaves,
squalls, hurricanes, calms so still
the whisper of a petrel's wings
carried across the gannet's bath;

the silk of lips, a catalogue of arms,
slide of skin on skin, sunsets
and rises over furtive hills,
the curled delights of rivers snaking
through deserts where falcons perch
on crags above the supplicating trees;

wet streets, familiarity of bars,
bodegas, cantinas, estaminets, shebeens,
solace of a lonely glass of wine,
froth of beer, aspirations of champagne,
glow of rum, time-stop of mescal
killing the slow tread of footfalls
and the pain of love.

Some day he too would surely disappear
beyond the pale of distances, beyond
the blue rhythms of a smoky night,
deep song of a summer dream,
with all the sadness of a trifling wind,
blue-brightness of a chuckling sea;

the stone of silence rolled across the door,
no change, no time, no music, no encore.

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cristinabejar Comment by: cristinabejar - 2007-03-31 03:19
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Not only did it make me smile. It made me cry. Thank you Freda for reading this. And thank you Milner for sharing it to us. - Cristina
milner place Comment by: milner place - 2007-03-31 03:12
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If the poem brought a smile to your friend, Freda, it earned its keep.

Milner
fredav Comment by: fredav - 2007-03-31 02:51
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Now I understand why my best friend asked me to read this. :)

You made her smile..

I keep going back to the 4th stanza..it evokes so much sadness laced with undertones of happiness. The contradicting emotions in that stanza are just amazing. Nicely done.

Freda
milner place Comment by: milner place - 2007-03-29 09:05
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Your thanks are my reward, Cristina.

Milner
manoj Comment by: manoj - 2007-03-29 04:02
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Life with opposites... nice.
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