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Moulin Rouge
Leaning against the air of the dark night
Soft whispers are heard, embraces felt tight
Deeper in thought, the flight reaches its height
Till sudden chills kill your body's cover
A fight is worth it all, but not on earth
Where knowledge shares not a part of the heart
To love, with time, a damndest thing that hurts
To hold in your arms a dying lover
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| Sad, touching, beautiful. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks! |
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Comment by: Loloix - 2007-12-10 04:18
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this is my first time to read a poem like this..
the pain is felt so good.. |
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Comment by: Anne - 2007-07-05 06:03
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Lovely well written poem thanks for sharing
Anne |
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Comment by: sudipal - 2007-04-15 15:52
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| This is a very beautiful poem, with at it's core: "The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to Love, and be Loved in return." |
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Comment by: PANDORA - 2007-04-02 12:21
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I loved the movie and remember how I felt when she died.
It was sad, yes, but it could not have ended another way.
Not every love story has a happy ending.
I have mixed feelings about some of the piece rhyming and some not.
I am a believer that form is in the eye of the beholder.
No matter what form you use this piece conveys strong emotion.** |
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