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| uncertainity, unreciprocated unconditional love - my inner child made 'that feeling' in my stomach; great work as always Emma |
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| so very touching...sad but so true, sometimes parents lose sight of right and wrong and just how they should treat young ones. Being a child is VERY hard. You did a really nice job at capturing this perspective. |
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| be nice to see another line after "I still love you." take it it about a parent...prob mother not father..be nice to add the twist..daddy I do. |
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| Wow. I really liked this poem. It made me feel like a child wondering if my mother loved me conditionally (like I feared)or unconditionally (like I was hoping). |
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| i think this is my favorite piece by you! outstanding job with this!! some kids ask these exactly questions everyday in their lives. you've captured the emotions well. |
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