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milner place
Milner Place
United Kingdom, West Yorkshire, Huddersfield

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Just one of the Graces

Two swallows sit
on the power line.

They're back.

Now there can be
a dreaming of summer
in a day-break of mist.

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milner place Comment by: milner place - 2007-04-01 11:31
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Maybe you, Ron, and I, are the 3 D-Graces, Alabaster.

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Alabaster DePlum Comment by: Alabaster DePlum - 2007-04-01 05:29
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No, I believe I am the third Disgrace
milner place Comment by: milner place - 2007-03-31 09:46
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Thanks Kimberly. I nominate you as the third Grace - see 4 comments back. (Could hardly use Ron or Alabaster in that post - or could I? - runs for cover)

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skettio Comment by: skettio - 2007-03-31 09:30
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This is a wonderful short poem that says so much! In it I see the promise of things to come with the changing of the season.
Alabaster DePlum Comment by: Alabaster DePlum - 2007-03-31 06:44
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Yes, you've been waiting to anticipate something...
Lovely, lovely cadence as ever, 'they're back'
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