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Edward DiMaio
United States, WI, Door County

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November's Wind

In the slightest movement
of the hands on my watch,
much less than a minute,
moment or second.

The entire world has changed.
Water falls softer onto rocks
that embrace it's arrival.
Above long slender growth
of the Black Willow sways
in a frigid breeze
saturated with sunlight.

Leaves are freed to dance
above the earth as they
drift down into my vision.

Looking at my watch now,
its hands are floating without a face.
Time, space,
what fills it is the same.
It is my vision that has changed,
falling open on November's cobalt wind.

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Blackbirdsong Comment by: Blackbirdsong - 2007-05-22 20:28
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I like the message of this poem. Time does change quickly, and along with it so do our perceptions of how and what takes place in that span.

Good job.
Frances Comment by: Frances - 2007-04-28 03:16
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jumping from one thing to another! Perhaps you're trying too hard! Just let it flow, dont force it like this one is. But you are trying and thats so very good!
Frances.
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