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Edward DiMaio
United States, WI, Door County

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Eat the Planet

Let's eat the planet

so we can belch real loud

and scratch our bellies.

Just before we die.

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DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe - 2008-09-30 23:53
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You are a master who can creates a new world! Well done. Best wishes.
solaris Comment by: solaris - 2007-05-21 01:33
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oooh, bitter. melikes bitter - what a pop at consumerism and ignorance. yes.
brad19 Comment by: brad19 - 2007-05-20 21:22
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Short, subtle but great, the tone in this piece was awesome
flameof Comment by: flameof - 2007-05-20 20:09
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rebellious and confident, let's do as you say
QueenMoniqwa Comment by: QueenMoniqwa - 2007-05-03 09:42
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Pithy and concise. I love that you've managed to encapsulate Gestaltist zeitgeist with 18 little words. Wow and wow.

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