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Shafts of erect bloom stems
sway in the evening breeze
from each tip
brilliant vaginal blooms
come to life
Deep in the hearts of blooms
lies life's secret of Unity
With one glance
I am saturated in this secret
captivated
intoxicated
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like the overlying of the flower/sexual imagery, like transparencies ... a field of orchid-type(?) blooms, exotic and pulsating in the evening light overlaid by the sex of the night, the coming together of male and female in copulation - stamen and pistil.
this is full of the imagery of coming together (excuse the pun) - 'uniting' might be a better word, even the sun appearing to touch and then be swallowed by the horizon.
pretty cool piece, reminds me of Pink Floyd's flowers/sex/cycle of life cartoon in The Wall. though i have to admit your imagery is far kinder than theirs, lol., which is horrific in its nature.
