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Nathalie Boisard-Beudin
Italy, Rome

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When it rains

I remember the rain in Leiden, flowing horizontally as it sometimes does in Holland, the smell of warm stroopwaffeln ringing its rich buttery scent in the moisture on market days.

The rain in Rome smells of the desert sand it carries over from Africa, the verbena and myrtle in the garden insinuating their ways into my books, looking over my shoulder at the pages being turned.

This week in Paris, a thin drizzle tells of subway aromas; this old childhood memory woven out of rubber wheels and tar, unique in the world, bringing back to life the taste of the mint fondants my grand-mother used to buy from the vending machines on the platforms.

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nadinesellers Comment by: nadinesellers Online- 2008-03-24 18:49
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Nathalie encore, ah yes i am with you, olfactory memory recalling each phrase especially in the rain.
thelonelyguy Comment by: thelonelyguy - 2008-01-30 22:35
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Hi Nathalie, it's the interior journeys that are the most interesting. I think we're all on that particular trip here. Look forward to travelling with you! :-)
spacedlaw Comment by: spacedlaw - 2008-01-30 22:31
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Thanks Mark. If you liked this one, then you might like to read Market Smells as well. My travels are nowhere as exotic as yours, though.
thelonelyguy Comment by: thelonelyguy - 2008-01-30 15:04
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warm and evocative. makes me want to get on the road again!
spacedlaw Comment by: spacedlaw - 2008-01-23 10:34
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Welcome on board, Linda! And thanks for reading.
And thank you to you too, Tommy, vanessa and Olaf!
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