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| Thank you Ethgar! A toast to the returning artist! Cheers to you! |
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Comment by: Ethgar - 2007-04-28 09:51
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| This is wonderful.. I love the way you have taken the chalice as a vessel to be defined by the liquid and changed it to be the active "thirsty vessel" same metaphor changed and turned into a beautiful poem... and the title is appropriate since it mentions what you seek and also defines your poem. |
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Comment by: roy - 2007-04-20 05:42
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I think "who makes what?" doesnt belong to this poem, however the rest is fantastic writing. The inigary is clear and fluency is there. I liek the analogy in this poem that you have used.
Thanks for the read.
Roy |
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| Thank you so much for the suggestion, dear Milner. You speak and I follow. - Cristina |
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| Yes, this is lovely, Cristina. I'd be tempted to take the 'i am' off the second stanza - just a thought. |
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