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saratu
saratu abiola
United States, north carolina, chapel hill

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do you see
what i am see
when i see
what i see?
do you feel
what i am feel
when i feel
what i am feel
when i feel
what i feel?
my, you're unpredictable.
every minute of my time
is spent on
dealing with the undealable
while
trying to comprehend the incomprehensible.
i try,
really i do,
to harmonize our thoughts
like a beethoven tune
but
we are like penguins in the Gambia.
maybe more like
snowfall in june

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Cherley Comment by: Cherley - 2006-01-01 19:26
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Sounds like two people with very different views. Unpredictable can be a good thing. Snowfall in June is possible. I saw it snow on Pike's Peak in August.
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