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throb25
Dawn Carter
United States, TX, Amarillo

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Dogma

You are brilliant
not serien.
You are a master
but not bright
by any means.
You demand order
you get no where.
People stop listening
honestly
no one cares.
Justice
a demanding word.
Fairness
not in your vocabulary.
Honesty
far and few
you wouldn't know the meaning
if it was thrown at you.
Subtle
you are to direct.
You couldn't be kind
there's no other words that express.
This is the way I describe you.
You are the government.
You are just a few.

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HorrorWriter41 Comment by: HorrorWriter41 - 2007-03-31 19:05
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I felt power also; I enjoyed the straightness of it.
throb25 Comment by: throb25 - 2007-03-31 14:42
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It's kinda both.
Comment by: - 2007-03-31 14:40
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serien? I'm not sure what that word is supposed to be/mean? Perhaps I've learned something new today. lol

I dont like the goverment much. Because of the religious connotation the title holds I couldnt tell is this poem was literal or metaphorical.

I like the format though... seems very powerful...

-j
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