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PANDORA
PAN DORA
United States, I AM, IN THE NEXT ROOM

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Love Knows Not Age-edit 5/08

She was older, he was younger.
The second he heard her name;
if she were watching,
which she wasn’t,
triggered a quick spark in his eyes.
He was instantly,
without second thought in love.

He had,
in fact,
loved her long before they met.

A fortunate meeting.
The one in a million chance.
Luck, fate, destiny
brought him into her life.

Silently and mystified he thought,
“she has no idea how beautiful she is.”

She was single, an older single,
a wiser single, a divorced single.
No illusions or ideals of love.
The kind of woman that thinks
they are way past their prime.

All that surrounded her was
young, beautiful women on the arms
of both young and older men.

She did not understand,
or could even conceive
his attraction or her hold on him.
Their first kiss,
a mania she had never felt,
the heat of her surprise.

Love does not know age.
It follows no set of rules.
Flowing freely along
life's eternal spring.
It just...is.

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MikeMack Comment by: MikeMack - 2008-05-10 18:47
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I like the movement of the last bit. The last line really brought the whole idea home. Its a very existential thought, that everything only "is" and nothing more or less. Kudos
jakrebs Comment by: jakrebs - 2007-05-10 15:41
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Everyone knows you've been putting up a lot of hormone driven stuff lately, but in a way this one (for me) has those things beat in the heat department. I bought into the "characters", enjoyed the twists and dug her 'surprise' at the spark she felt in the end. The presentation is good too; the short lines are just what this poem calls for. Once again I'm impressed by your range, I always like coming over to your neck of the woods to see what you are cooking up next.
arekususan Comment by: arekususan - 2007-04-09 13:10
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Good lesson: doesn't matter how old or young an individual may be: love is love and nothing much can change that.
PANDORA Comment by: PANDORA - 2007-04-04 09:21
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I really liked those lyrics.

I hear music differently then other people.

I listen to the lyrics not the melody sometimes.

Some of the lyrics amaze me.

I wonder how in the hell they wrote such beautiful words.

Oh, thanks for the typo it is supposed to be party's.

Thank you all for your comments.

Sheri.

p.s.--it is sappy to me because of my personal feelings on love.
Kerosene Comment by: Kerosene - 2007-04-04 07:41
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Did you really write this?? haha

The short phrasing worked well here. Nice read.

john
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