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pollyurathane
Megan Lynton-Escreet
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The Immaculate Concept

Compared to rosebush royalty
Odin had more dignity
And widely, Christianity
Is founded upon misery
With smaller roots in chastity
But nearly none in victory
So based upon their history
And that which they see happily
For convenience, it would seem to me,
God is dead, like chivalry.

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Paddy Comment by: Paddy - 2008-06-28 14:48
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Chivalry is not dead, I am the nave of one called Maureen and tend to her very well.
pollyurathane Comment by: pollyurathane - 2007-04-01 21:18
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Manoj -

Er, not entirely sure what you meant, but I think I get it.

Christ, the 'rosebush royalty' (crown of thorns etc.), was crucified and stabbed with a spear. Odin was similarly punished, spear and all, and came *before* Christ.

Clear anything up?
manoj Comment by: manoj - 2007-04-01 21:14
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Odin is known as father of Gods ...Odin is unhappy... God being dead.
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