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fetusripper
John Putignano
United States, RI, East Providence

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Deicidal Dreams and the Lust for Misanthropy

With shackles and chains
The heretic waits
Forever entangled
In misanthropy

The devil sits by the lake
Daydreaming of the abyss
Your mad redeemer curses him
As she shakes his bloody fist

Thou without sin
Cast the first stone
But all rock is
Reduced to dust

The lottery emptied
Still they strike me
As the battered man dies
A god grows inside

Let me feel the rapture
I want to smell the dolor
Stimulate me with
The final holocaust

And until this day
I patiently wait
The four horsemen
To steal the spotlight

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blackroseforove Comment by: blackroseforove - 2006-01-03 13:19
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this is awesome. you said in a comment one one of my poems you don't really write poetry much...well, you've done an excellent job with this one-- keep it up. : )
Comment by: - 2006-01-03 04:52
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i love it!
Cherley Comment by: Cherley Online- 2006-01-02 17:20
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Your poem seems very spiritual to me. Good verses evil. I liked it. Thanks for the warning about the horror in your stories. Your handle fetus ripper (and the name of your band)sounds very horrible. I guess it's meant to be an attention grabber. It sounds like an abortion. I'll read your other works when I get a chance.
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