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| I feel as if you wrote that for me! It definately conveys feelings that I have had regarding my ex. I write a lot about trust issues, so I really enjoyed reading someone else's work on that topic. Well written. Thank you for the comment. |
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Comment by: roy - 2007-04-05 08:46
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Michelle, i agree with Staucody, "these words really come to life" They do, so much is said in so few words, flirtatious, tempting and demanding, as a feminine lover should be, very feminine, this poem.
Thanks for the read
xxx
Roy |
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| i really loved this poem, it gives both sides of the situation, because both do get hurt, good writing, regards konkenstein. |
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| So do I, it gives me an idea for a challenge! |
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I can feel the ache emanating from this poem. It's awful when trust goes from a relationship.
Love Bumpskillz' come back! |
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