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Grounded Vertigo
Michelle Penny
United Kingdom

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Someday

There are too many
Somedays
In our lives
Too many
It will happen
Someday
Too many
I'll get there
Someday

We all need to recognise
Someday
Is one day
And that one day
Should be
Today

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wolfgrl1423 Comment by: wolfgrl1423 - 2007-04-10 09:57
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Nice poem, I guess we all hope for someday... I like your graphics, this is the first time I see a writer using this style. Very unique. great job!
ofmay Comment by: ofmay - 2007-04-08 07:37
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Love it, for me I would swap "should" for "is"
Love you graphics!
denisedee Comment by: denisedee - 2007-04-06 04:55
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would make a great poster or card.

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roy Comment by: roy - 2007-04-05 08:30
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Reminds me of a Beatles song, I can't remember which one, but the tune is hanging in my head now...aaa..thats it "Nowhere Man". Ok, now this is a little longer than white screen, so took me time to get through. Yup we spend too much worrying about things that never happen, i guess your message is "live the moment"

Thanks for the read

xxx

Roy
Comment by: - 2007-04-05 05:45
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I'm with Sheri on this ... the method of presentation catches the eye. I love the message ... though simple, it's one many of us need to repeat like a mantra. If not today, when? If not you, who? Wonderful.

It's on my bookshelf, too. Thanks for a great write.

Michael.
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