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Comment by: Valerie - 2007-04-16 16:25
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| Alliteration, assonance and the embedding of consonance echo the sounds of verbal music within a piece well written. I always enjoy taking a trip back in time with you. |
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Comment by: manoj - 2007-04-09 23:03
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Morns expressed in non-conventional fashion with ...
Betwixt morn's glow and incubo
Who can touch reality
Who can hear the screams.... liked. |
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As always you capture a moment with such clairity.
Good job. |
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| loved it!! good rythm and flow. like the language used and the use of repetition of line 2. particularly like lines4 and 5 . good ending . |
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