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PhatBob
Bob Rainey
United Kingdom

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Belfast Prayer

Oh Belfast, we beseech thee
with your streets of glass and dirt
Press us to your fractured heart
and numb us to the hurt

Then warm us by your tyre fires
that plume sweet and poison smoke,
and give us drink and violence;
a sore to poke and poke

But lead us then to hill-top
and display to us your all
And try to help us realise
that we build our own walls

Help us see, for all that's wrong
the city's not to blame;
The people need to fight the fire,
or else they fan the flames

Amen.

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Nana Comment by: Nana - 2007-05-10 04:55
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I love the flow of this poem. The rhyming is very smooth and easy-going. Nice work!
Charmain Comment by: Charmain - 2006-01-19 08:54
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haha good on ya :P
PhatBob Comment by: PhatBob - 2006-01-18 17:11
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Don't know if you know the prayer "Oh Sacrament most holy, Sacrament divine..." well this is the same sort of rhythm. Stole it off the church - ho ho
Charmain Comment by: Charmain - 2006-01-04 08:07
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I remember you sent me this when i was doing one of my runner's outta here - and picked it up when i was in zurich and i was like awwwwww :)

i love this piece Bobster xxx
Ruairi Comment by: Ruairi - 2006-01-04 02:58
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Just love that word 'plume' soft and thick. This poem certainly works for me, highlighting the realities of the city we live in. 'Streets of glass and dirt' is another wonderful image.

Enjoyed it Bob.
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